EDMUND'S POEM PART 1(Read it and maybe you'll know why it took my breathe away)

A golden sun set in the horizon,
the sandy beach bask in its glorious motion
the picture tells a thousand words
yet none could tell me the story of my missing maiden
How the lonely heart ache, i wonder
Is she happy , Is she sad?
Is she content with what she gets?

Tell me ,oh whispering wind
news of my missing heart-to-be
Is she safe , is she snug?
Is she fine with that warmly hut
that i set upon with my prayers
that i hope upon with my wishes.....

Wash away her troubles, oh mighty waves
yet keep her close to the sandy bay
let her know that im not far away
just some distance from the love gateway
Show her the way my mighty waves , and make her stay
make her stay....

Cover her with your love , oh fluffy clouds
shape the wonders, shape my love
Shape the heaven that i dream on earth
tell the stories of my love , cover the blushes when i do see her....

Now oh Glorious Sun, Would you bake my love-made cookie crumbs
So its golden , crunchy just like what she wants
Sweet and honeyed , oh so nicely done
Now send it to her, wrapped in your golden beams and warmth...
Now would you do me the favour ,Oh Glorious Sun ?
Set you may but please send her what i've done...

let not my efforts gone to none.....

Poem created by: Edmund
Extract from Wholivesnearyou.com forum

P.S: If you know who you are and if this poem is yours, sorry to have copied your work to paste it here but I just want you to know that I admire your poem work very much. Once again, my apologies...